Writing ex. 2

These two critics had varying views on how good spider man 2 was. Both critics took plot, writing and dialogue into account. Ebert loved the film and thought it was the best super hero movie to date while Gilchrist was disappointed in what he saw. Ebert particularly liked how the plot placed emphasis on Peter Parker's life problems. On the other hand Gilchrist thought the plot unfolded to slowly in many of the scenes. Gilchrist had similar thoughts about the dialogue also thinking it was too long and not captivating enough to hold the audiences attention. Ebert liked the dialogue and how it was about emotion, love and values. Gilchrist didn't mention much about the acting but Ebert thought it was excellent.

Chapter 1 Exercise

a. The local government would tell you that Ohio's groundwater is clean although recent findings suggests otherwise.
b. Novel X is critically acclaimed to be a modern day masterpiece by many English professors.
c. You would think that an extremely physical and fast paced game would be exciting.
d. My experiences in classrooms have lead me to believe that males tend to dominate classroom discussions.
e. Many of my peers say how the movie shows how loving relationships bring people together but i think the message of the movie is something else.
f. My professors believe writing templates make one a better writer.