Essay R Grade and Rationale

I would give this essay a C+.

I thought this paper was nothing above average. I felt there was a lack of structure. The author never presented a clear and concise argument between the two subjects in comparison in the beginning two paragraphs of the essay. As well as never presented an outline of what was to be compared. Reading through the paper I felt that it lacked interesting and captivating topic sentences, for example the topic sentence on line 51 was dull. Another problem i had with the paper is that it never mentioned what the similarities were between professional wrestling today versus wrestling in the 80's. I noticed there were grammatical errors on lines 17, 44 and 55. These are the reasons why i gave this paper a C+.