Workshop Draft

I think a workshop draft should contain the major ideas and arguments of a final paper. I would expect a draft to have structure but since it being only a draft the structure may be poor. The purpose of a draft is for one to organize and write out all of their thoughts. Often the audience of a draft is one's own peers because they are the ones that will provide feedback. A final draft differs in that it is free of grammatical errors. Also the organization of ideas is clear, concise and makes sense.
I would tell the writer of Essay R that more sources would help strengthen his argument and make it more accurate. As well as that he needs to focus more on wrestling in the 1980's. Another thing i would tell the author is that he lacks a clear thesis and his argument for how wrestling got better is weak.